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    What are your comments about this short business like letter?

    Could you assist me in making it better? Thank you in anticipation for your valued assistance. ---- Dear Gomez (supervisor of the security Dept.), Thanks you all for your early action as stated in you previous mail. But this morning we still have problem with the Security team at the gate...
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    What are your comments abour this short business-like letter?

    Please take time to make it perfect sense and concise as well. ... Dear Mr. Gomez, I've completed and minimized the size of file concerning the Permit cards for operating our lifting equipment. Please take time to double-check the format of those cards. Afterwards, I'll print them out. Thanks...
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    Is this business-like e-mail succinct or does it make sense?

    Could you please take time to make it pretty concise? ... Dear Gomez (supervisor of the security Dept.), Thank you all for your action as stated in the previous mail. But this morning we still have problem with the Security team at the gate. Many times Jacques and I liaised with Security Guard...
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