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    I had to fix some errors on my poem. Tell me what you think?

    Fallen down Tripping over The cord of life So down and hurt Looking up Reaching out your hand Help is what you demand As the people walk by Laughing at your fall Hoping you die As you lay and cry Face filled with dirt and tears A dark combination Years of begging for help Hardships of helping...
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    Tell me what you think about my new poem?

    Heart pushes tons Sweat becomes bullets Pulses are guns Eyes move around Without permission Eye contact becomes avoided Causing delusion Leaving the theory of life With mental confusion Suicide knocks on your mind Wisdom becomes blind Light seems so far away Thinking today Is just another cloudy...
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    Tell me what yall think about my brand new poem?

    Leaving the past Leaving the past Something that’s not easy to do Packing your soul up And leave Getting into the Uhaul of life Leaving the past It doesn’t seem right Looking in the rear view mirror Trying to remember The bad times Driving slow Because you’re not ready to go Not looking ahead...
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    I made a love poem for a girl I like.. I need alot of thoughts please?

    Your heart is a kettle I want to melt inside When I wrap around you Chills run up my spine That perfume of yours Fumigates an entire room Your cinnamon legs Spices up my life Your lips make mine tingle My tongue locks in place Whenever you’re in sight A good to my bad Being around you...
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    I made a poem for a girl.. Should I give it to her>?

    Your heart is a kettle I want to melt inside When I wrap around you Chills run up my spine That perfume of yours Fumigates an entire room Your cinnamon legs Spices up my life Your lips make mine tingle My tongue locks in place Whenever you’re in sight A good to my bad Being around you...
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    Come fly with me.... This ANOTHER new poem I made.. Give me thoughts?

    Come fly with me Come fly with me To the heavens above Spread our wings Share our love Our love symbolizes a dove A swan in the pond Come fly with me To a peaceful scenery The sun is bright The grass is green Birds chirp For all eternity Flying away from earth Place of darkness and hurt...
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    System restore.... Tell me what you think about my new poem.?

    System Restore Wanting to go back Fix fragmentations Let’s go back To where we first started Restore all of the broken times together Recycling the bad times Bringing back good times Agreeing you refuse to do This whole idea was mines
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    Give me thoughts on my new poem called rolller coaster?

    I want to perform this also at my church. Give me your thoughts.. My mind form Is a roller coaster That people Want to ride To see what’s inside This mind of mines Taking you through The vibes and the thrills Pain that gives you chills Hold on!! As my problems Cause glitches and bumps Bent...
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    Read my poem and comment please?

    Nightmares Leaves the disturbed Disturbed and hurt Waking up out of sweats Dreams you’ll never forget Could have been Would have been Reality is a shouldn’t have been Disturbance A raging turbulent The sun shines outside Darkness darkens The beauty of it inside
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    Tell me what ya'll think about my new poem. Do you understand the messge?

    I’m calling you Running away From poetic rhymes Negative critics Kills me every time Put the pen down Throwing away the pad Poetic flows have become Addiction that’s turned bad A voice in my ear I don’t want to hear A soft voice That sounds sweet and clear Syncing in and out What is this about...
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