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    How does a lobotomy affect intelligence?

    I was just wondering what happened to peoples' intelligence who'd gone through a lobotomy. Also, do you think the song "Novacane" by Beck implied this practice?
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    Who can help me with my astronomy homework?

    get a CD and look them up if light pollution is getting in your way.
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    Snap Shot Poetry, Did I Do It Right? Honesty, Please.?

    I'm petty to do this and am going to delete the other because I'm desperate for feedback of honest sorts. "The Young Death" Do I know God? Why yes, yes I do I went with him on a walk, he kept me True. "Selfishness" Selfishness is the name of this contagious disease Upon the mind Upon the...
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    ANYBODY GOOD AT POETRY?!!! 10 pointsssx?

    Notables I could go on & on My list would be Forever long Edgar Allen Haunting Poe with dark prose Make nights woe Emily Dickinson's Sweet diction Simple mission makes us listen Douglas Adams sends us far far past Mars into the stars Issac Asimov May plot be strong "Robots of Dawn"...
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    A Poem About Insomnia?

    I haven't slept in days My eyes they do so burn There's nothing to say When will I ever learn? Sweet dreams, slumber Must a slave I stay My lids heavy as lumber Will I be forever this way? Insomnia, a bully you are Stealing peaceful sleep As I stare at bright stars In your arms me you keep...
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    What Does THis Poem Mean to You?

    "Evolution" She looked at me I looked at her Understanding She could be me I coud be her Turns tangling I was her, not Was she me, by Chance Happening? Rats and humans Together grow, To Time's chosing I lay to rot She lives in rot All revolving Suns rise, circles Vantage closing She could be me...
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    What do you think about this free verse poem?

    wow, this is really powerful. I'd say to either put it in a center format, which I don't think you can do here, or work on making the lines a little more even. All in all, powerful poem, nice imagery.
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    A song to fit the poem "Because I would not stop for death"Emily dickenson?

    "Spirit in the Sky" by Greenbaum or "Dust in the Wind" by Kansas.
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    Calling all poets? How do I spice up this saying?

    A million follow the footsteps of a hero. His actions are the guiding winds to which ships sail. His words are the sword that defend the roads less traveled. His eyes shine pure justice, and his spirit protects all from drowning tides.
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    Easy 10points Poets need some help!?

    Rebecca this Rebecca that Is what I put up with At the table I sat The calling known The word cursed With bitter hatred Now it's the reverse "To tie" is the true meaning of my name To all that I love Another? not the same.
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    My first poem attempt. Opinions pleasee...?

    I would repeat a phone conversation or have it start on every stanza, like "Hello," the dark fellow declared secretly, invisible, he sneered. "Hello," the return was given Innocent of the crime coming. "
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