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    20 stanza poem i wrote that i feel is actually fairly good. entitled "Not Quite...

    ...Freedom..." very easy read? Ever since you stormed my brain No matter what I try I have this nag, this constant pain That never seems to die It started as it often does I met you through a friend I 'member thinking "what's the buzz? Could life you really mend?" If I knew then what I do now...
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    would you critique my poem (its my first)?

    Again it falls... Descending, as the mighty gavel of justice Ever present and wholly fearsome Yet curiously soothing; strangely trusted. As the unmistakable sensations embrace, the tingling chill, the glassy dew, I halt, amidst the chaos, to reflect And do bear witness to hope. For as the...
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    critique my poetry please! will you?

    Again it falls... Descending, as the mighty gavel of justice Ever present and wholly fearsome Yet curiously soothing; strangely trusted. As the unmistakable sensations embrace, the tingling chill, the glassy dew, I halt, amidst the chaos, to reflect And do bear witness to hope. For as the...
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    I wrote a poem, will you give feedback please?

    Along with feedback i'd like your interpretations as well! what feelings and images does it evoke? Again it falls... descending, as the mighty gavel of justice ever present and wholly fearsome yet curiously soothing... strangely trustworthy As the unmistakable sensations embrace, the...
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