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    Can you feel the emotion in this poem?

    I just wrote this in a spur the other day. This is a slightly edited version. If you could let me know how this makes you feel or if there are any areas I should change I would appreciate it.... I am so lonely but nobody can see The sky is filled with sadness and it’s pouring over me I just...
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    can i get adobe flash for my eeepc asus 900?

    ok so i got the eeepc asus 900 , its a netbook soo now that ive kinda gotten used to it i want to get like flash and stuff like that on there but i cant find how to, any help, instructions would be great, and if my netbook doesnt have the stuff needed or flash just tell me... i need to know ps...
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    i just got a nwe netbook and im haveing difficulties getting like the

    shockwave and flash stuff, help? ok well i just got a new netbook and need to install like shockwave and flash stuf for it, how do i do that , give me a website with instructions, im have firefox and umm i think windows, my comp is an asus eee pc, i think that what its called.
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    my new netbook is having difficulties installing the flash program stuff. help?

    i just got a netbook and so far it has been working really well but i need to install like th flash programmy thingy on it for some of te various programs i use... but it wont install and i mean it might have been before i exed out of it but if it had i really was not telling me... one of the...
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    How is this poem? Any help would be great?

    I write alot of really good poems...the problem is that they usually just come to me and are filled with more emotion. This is me just trying. Anyways, if you could let me know I would appreciate it. Yet another sad day The 14th of September It used to mean something Or don’t you remember It...
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    my mom's buick century is crap..any help?

    last night my son and I rode in the backseat and she rolled down the back window and it wouldn't go back up. I've been telling her for atleast acouple years to get rid of it b/c things like this constantly happen...well my question is how do we get it to stay up? After we got home I was able...
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    If I want to paint a new design on my skateboard do I have to get the old...

    ...paint off first? Is it better to just paint over the old design, or is it better to sandpaper off the old design and THEN paint the new design? And also, what type of paint should I use (acrylic, etc)? And what kind of stuff do I have to put on afterwards so the paint won't peel off.
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    Please critique this poem of mine! Just let me know how it makes you feel?

    For some reason I have had a hard time with this one. I am not asking anybody to write this for me! Lol, if you could just offer me suggestions on areas I should change I would appreciate it. Thank you! A girl waits near her windowsill At the same time every day. A boy passes by, bucket in...
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    Just started writing a book, does it sound good so far?

    What is the target audience for this story, before you ask people to give criticism.
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    Please, what do you think of this poem? Please?

    A girl sits at her windowsill: The same time every day. A boy walks by, bucket in hand: She melts as he walks away. When the sun is high, he strolls through town. The people stop and stare. It drives them crazy, he always goes, But none of them know where! This girl, she frowns. This boy, he...
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    Please! give me constructive criticism on this poem. Anybody who has loved should read?

    A girl sits at her windowsill: The same time every day. A boy walks by, shovel in hand: She watches as he walks away. When the sun is high, he strolls through town. The people stop and stare. It drives them crazy, he always goes, But none of them know where! This girl, she frowns. This boy...
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    Should I shorten this poem? It is already pretty short I promise! Please read!?

    Somewhere in the darkness, An abandoned flower grows. A shadow of a beautiful love. A shadow of a rose. A lost lover, He stands above the thorns. An epitome of emptiness. This dying rose, he mourns. He wishes he could burn these thorns, So that he could hold on, But after all the petals float...
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    Please help me with this poem! Anybody can help?

    Somewhere in the darkness, An abandoned flower grows. A shadow of a beautiful love. A shadow of a rose. A lost lover, He stands above the thorns. An epitome of emptiness. This dying rose is what he mourns. He wishes he could burn these thorns, So that he could hold on, But after all the petals...
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    Please help me perfect this poem! Easy ten points?

    Cross my heart and hope to die. I’m writing this suicide note, But I don’t know why. Why or how or who or where. You’re in my dreams, But, when I wake up, nobody is there. The room is dark and i’m all alone. My eyes are open, but nobody is home. I try and try to get over the past, But I look...
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    My poem, Queen of Hearts. Should I change anything?

    Queen of Hearts Thats what you are Whats that on my card? That is your scar For this scarred card Was once a king He still would be If he knew of the wrath the queen could bring For this fair king, now half as tall Perhaps a deuce? Queen watch him fall The queen and the joker, now they play the...
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    Is it okay to use the AP Chemistry prep book for SAT 2 Chem?

    I recently bought the AP Chemistry prep book..but can it be used for SAT 2. Is the AP book rigorous enough to study from?(:
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    How To do a wheelie on a Yamaha TTR- 125?

    I have a Yamaha TTR 125 and i really want to learn how to ride a wheelie on it. I tried to look up videos and other questions but they all told me stuff that i did not understand like popping the clutch and stuff like that. If you can help me out by telling me how to do a wheelie while driving...
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