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  1. J

    Thoughts on this Haiku?

    pretension en vogue stifles bohemian lungs-- verbose platitude
  2. J

    I made a love poem for a girl I like.. I need alot of thoughts please?

    I don't think you want to say "That perfume of yours/ Fumigates an entire room." Unless you're wanting to poke fun at her perfume...Like it's so strong it makes all the bugs want to leave. I think she will love it regardless, but I would like to have read more description about what she does...
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