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    What do you think of my poem please be honnest!?

    Ghost of love By: McKenna Sandoval ~Vision~ For a brief moment I saw you, Like when you breathe air on a cold winter day, Your faint shadow brought me comfort And when you said my name, I melted as if I was a candle that had been lit. ~description~ Sitting at my vanity I raised my head I saw...
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    What do you think of my poem? I need some help with the ending?

    Masquerade By- McKenna Sandoval A whole new personality A brand new way to see Open up your eyes and just try to find me I might be over here I might be over there ....there is no way of knowing You will get to meet my inner soul Now it’s not about beauty or looks, If seeing is believing...
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    What do you think? I'm fifteen poetry is my passion.?

    Its really good, i love your rhyming and your rhythm, just so you know poetry doesn't all ways have to rhyme but i love it, its very well written. Applause to you.
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    What do you think of my poem?

    A winters day: By: McKenna Sandoval I feel the coldness of Jack Frost’s breath on my cheek. I look to the Heavens, and one by one each hand carved flake falls upon the world; a blanket of powder looks so peaceful. That is just what our earth needs now. The laughter of the youth playing amongst...
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