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    Do you like this poem I wrote?

    A simple but touchy poem.
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    I need help finishing/fixing this poem that I'm trying to write?

    Just end with two lines of the last stanza, if you are not very particular about the rhyme and length. I am locked behind a door, I am searching for the key,
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    ok...is this weird?please answer?

    Getting suicidal thoughts when in grief is common. Getting stronger at heart makes a human worthy to admire. I admire your strong will since you have not yet taken that cowardly step to end yourself. The ways of this world are not known, how one undergoes such unexpected incidents and all that...
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    ARE THESE GOOD POEMS??? please look and tell me...?

    Your thoughts are so poetic. Keep writing. You are able to put small heartfelt ideas into poems. Take care of the words you spell. A misspelled word mars the meaning of a poem. You must present a poem for the readers to feel comfort without such errors. For example, My hear said yes So for once...
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    Please analyze & critique my poem: Laconical. Is it really worth?

    Laconical The green that shines avid in the leaf is the spleen that refines the Red in thy Life. The bush that abounds with little bloom is the flesh that binds on thy skeletal frame. The light that looms from suns of sky is the sight that zooms from lens of eye. The force that holds water...
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    Would you care to comment on this poem?

    The facts of life well understood. A great poem, indeed. Willingness to live in this insipid world is the confidence: "Your confidence IS the captain to get you there;" And one has to be resilient "Depends on Your durability," And a reconciliation with the life we are in: "Life is still just...
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