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Being an atheist this doesn;t make sense but Ill say it anyway :D Jesus If jesus were to come back, not that anyone would believe a man running around claiming to be the son of god even now... he would be sanctioned, the media would never stop reporting that. Think about it, if the ACTUAL guy...

I like it but think that the rhyming is unnecessary. It kind of ruined it for me and in some places it didn't make sense purely because you tried to make it rhyme. I like the poem and think that it has a good message and like your concept of being there and then not. Well done

Yes I liked it. The use of the raven sort of navigated through the desription instead of you as the writer moving it, the characters were able to do this for you. Some of it is a bit typical but overall well done

My Soul, Prayer, Dream Oh and btw some of it doesn't make sense. Even your title "please ... that I write" It should be that I wrote. I think you should rewrite some of checking it makes sense before you start looking for a title