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    A Villanelle to read and c/c?

    MAN! you can shoot these out with ease wonderful my friend... absolutely!
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    A Villanelle to read and c/c?

    MAN! you can shoot these out with ease wonderful my friend... absolutely!
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    A Villanelle to read and c/c?

    MAN! you can shoot these out with ease wonderful my friend... absolutely!
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    What would you do to improve this quick villanelle?

    I am in awe! this piece flows so smoothly I have done a villanelle or two and AGAIN, you make it seem so easy-- it is not! ?
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    What would you do to improve this quick villanelle?

    I am in awe! this piece flows so smoothly I have done a villanelle or two and AGAIN, you make it seem so easy-- it is not! ?
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    What would you do to improve this quick villanelle?

    I am in awe! this piece flows so smoothly I have done a villanelle or two and AGAIN, you make it seem so easy-- it is not! ?
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    'politically speaking' rambling or something to consider? c/c?

    as the snow Flakes fell around i knew this would happen before it started. they ranted and raved about Change; yes, i have a penny and a dime in my pocket: kept there because work... useless time wasted looking for it. as the Flakes replace themselves, because they were to dumb to see: Change...
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    could you ever learn to like a forced rhyme scheme? c/c?

    this throbbing in my head has dulled my sight as I awoke early from my shortened night coffee, to my surprise was no retreat could you cut off my head and make it neat? this little ditty that I write sings true of my plight while head and neck are sore I giggle and my soul does soar so, with...
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    "In ANGER I danced" what do you think? Poetry or garbage? c/c?

    by Sandy giggles 1-11-10 anger came upon me at unawares overcoming any niceties left within only vile bitterness spewed forth could not control this outburst didn't have a clue from whence it came it felt so good to get all worked up over nothing so it seemed I put on some "angry" music and...
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    Would you comment on my Dorsimbra about the limitations of words poets?

    Gosh, I wrote a few Dorsimbra's back in the day... this is very good form is excellent--as usual... I like your words---I love it when poets use juxtaposed, that word makes me giggle for some reason... tee hee...
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