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The waves of the sea wash over me. I clutch my head in pain. My heart broken, and nausea in my stomach. My legs are soaked from the water, my body shivering, but I feel nothing. I'm numb. It's over. I collapse fully on the rocky ground of the beach, the pale light of the moon bathing my bare...

This is a very rough draft of the first part of my story. I originally planned to flesh my idea out a bit more before trying to write it, but when inspiration strikes, you have to answer. I would really like to hear your opinions and comments on it. Any suggestions or ideas would be welcome...

This is a very rough draft of the first part of my story. I originally planned to flesh my idea out a bit more before trying to write it, but when inspiration strikes, you have to answer. I would really like to hear your opinions and comments on it. Any suggestions or ideas would be welcome...

This is a very rough draft of the first part of my story. I originally planned to flesh my idea out a bit more before trying to write it, but when inspiration strikes, you have to answer. I would really like to hear your opinions and comments on it. Any suggestions or ideas would be welcome...