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  1. J

    hows this poem? i would like feedback please. c for c?:)?

    Assuming its appreciated I suffocate my intuitions And collect them all inside me. All my thoughts, my little dolls I line in rows and brush their hair. And although love has proved unfair, Purposefully i continue. I do believe its worth the war Tumbling down my house of cards. Allow him to...
  2. J

    hows this poem? i would like feedback please. c for c?:)?

    Assuming its appreciated I suffocate my intuitions And collect them all inside me. All my thoughts, my little dolls I line in rows and brush their hair. And although love has proved unfair, Purposefully i continue. I do believe its worth the war Tumbling down my house of cards. Allow him to...
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