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    Is my sister good at poetry?

    Same question. New poem. Opinions?:). She's 12. "Goodbye", She's all dressed up in her tear-stained attire. She waves at the traitor, the mourner, the liar, There's a wave of faint laughter, then everyone cries, They bow their heads down, there's no life in her eyes, She discovers a world...
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    Is my sister good at poetry?

    Same question, new poem. She's 12, opinions? Why would I want it to be this way? I’ll sneak out at night, and I’ll cry in the day, I’ll drink tea out of teacups and dance in the rain, To get your attention, to take all your pain. I’ll wear all your problems like a coat everyday, I’ll laugh and...
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    Is my sister good at poetry..?

    Shes 12. And I think shes amazing, but I was wondering what you thought? :) xx Death was all I could see in her shadowed black eyes., A tear of red blood, drip, drip, someone dies. No life, no joy in her threatening stare, Is there someone behind me, hello are you there? xx
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