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    critique on my poem please?

    On a night like tonight,You bring me to life And remind me there's another side of day. Where I will see who you are ,More than a sky full of stars And the worries of this world will fade away,On the other side of day. Time is what gets to the best of us,Reminding all that it's not here for long...
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    help me use different words for this poem?

    Don't look over your shoulder for me cause that's just the ghost of me you're seeing I have moved on and become stronger and that's not who I am you see You say you want me back but I can't play that roll any longer you never let me be free so I will free myself and let you feel what I felt...
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