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    I just want to ask if I should still continue this story. Please critic.?

    It was a bright afternoon that Tuesday. The sun shone its splendor to the place of the solemn souls, Dachau. The Reich must have been a little thoughtful since the concentration camp, made especially for Jews, was slightly huge, but too bad it cannot support nearly ten thousands of people living...
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    hi!! Please judge my poem...?

    Hi! I'm really an amateur in making poems... This poem I made is supposed for our literature class. I really need your help.. I'm not sure is this poem is lovely or if it has errors. I badly need your help.. You have my thanks in advance... A poem by a luckless friend The secrecy in her heart...
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