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    How my poem? Rate and critique...?

    These tears, They fall to no end. Like raindrops on rooftops They bring peace But not joy. These tears, They are my worst enemy. They give me away When time is too short. These tears, They often consume me. Making me a selfish fake. These tears, They are my friends. They tell me it’s okay...
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    What do you think of this poem I wrote? Poets out there?

    this is really good though. nice emotion. try adding some more punctuation here and there. hey it reminds me of New Moon from the Twilight saga.....
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