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    poem for boyfriend- especially guys answer?

    Boyfriend- poem for him, critique? It rhymes and the first letters of Each verse spell out "HAPPINESS" There is an extra line at the end b/c "Happiness" has an odd number of letters Does it sound good? bad? what would make it better? any feedback please ...HONEST criticism...tell me why you like...
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    Boyfriend-poem for him, please critique?

    Boyfriend- poem for him, critique? It rhymes and the first letters of Each verse spell out "HAPPINESS" There is an extra line at the end b/c "Happiness" has an odd number of letters Does it sound good? bad? what would make it better? any feedback please ...HONEST criticism...tell me why you like...
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