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    Suggestions on my poem? Critique?

    Ahh, it's a bit rusty, but I only just turned 13. x] And, I was sleepy when I wrote this. Haha. Well, please tell me how I can improve on this...? And suggestiosn for a title.. Thank you. A POEM BY HALENA N. Forever the clouds might shiver... Relentless, the waves will rise. But even time...
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    Any advice for a middle schooled poet? <33?

    I've posted these poems before, but I decided to put them all together, and see what you guys think. Some of them I've written recently and some I've written years ago. I'm not asking you to read them all, but read what you can, and tell me what you think. Thanks. :D The water sits still like...
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