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Oooooh. kinda creepy! Lines 2, 3, and 4 gave me goosebumbs. I loove how that's set up. And yeah, there's nothing wrong with rambling if it gets the message across.

Wow I actually really like this. It has a good balance of simplicity and strong word choice. It makes you think, yet is not difficult to understand. Very good! Oh, a space between the stanza's would be nice, it would give more conviction to "praying for a miracle to happen." It would make it a...