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    What do you say about this poem and where you place it from 0-9?

    786 - 6 March 2012 - Zahid from Pakistan DEATH Like bride my death does fascinate me I want to die, death, take me with thee I been alone in the world of happiness And never been kissed, you better kiss On my sense and draw my spirit away I am strongly hurt, make me thy prey I been along in...
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    Can you evaluate this poem please? What sense it makes you?

    786 – 24 February 2011 – Zahid from Pakistan MORE FACES TO MALICE ME She was such a soft sound Amongst jangling sounds Those always tore my ears Ears to listen her softy songs Cleared in jangling sounds Delight is in clutches of fate Fate earned by Satan or man No, not, never for gods, I say...
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    Poll - if you find someone making love?

    what will you do? beat them or will just join them or you will leave them doing like that
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    Can you evaluate this poem please?

    786 – 27 January 2011 – Zahid from Pakistan I AM RECALLED BY HER Here brutal words Walking on the surface of my heart She did not care to utter If do or don’t hurt She has her direction She moved on Ignoring me As I am an illegitimate birth Though I don’t blame her She did it unintentionally...
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    need English learning help? can you tell me please!?

    this is called dough http://blogs.villagevoice.com/runninscared/pizza%2Bdough.jpg and what these small pieces of dough are called http://www.woodstone-corp.com/images/food/naples/nap_dough_finished_lg.jpg blessing Zahid from Pakistan
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    Re-Write - Can you evaluate this poem please?

    786 – 13 January 2011 – Zahid from Pakistan WHY YET WORKING MY BRAIN? I live in a mud made house Here I don’t have a spouse My siblings are quite dead They’re to serve me thread Origin of our life is ‘crying’ Breaths: filled with sighing My flesh under a leafless tree Making me slander my...
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    Poll - What do you do when you are bore?

    do you chat with your friends? any one can chat with me? Blessing Zahid from Pakistan
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    can you help me? (I need to study in your country)?

    i need to know about law universities in your county and the charges the demand for it also kindly if you tell me, if i could get work along with that degree how much monthly charges i need to stay in your country? Blessing Zahid form Pakistan
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    Will you evaluate this poem please?

    786 22 November 2010 Zahid from Pakistan AFTER I FOUND MYSELF A day I came to know! I dwell in some roses I am in the fragrance of love I am the piece of your flesh Away but not apart from you How did I feel myself? By the time I was in rose The time in the fragrance By time I was in rainbow...
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    Can you evaluate this poem please?

    786 15 November 2010 Zahid from Pakistan I AM WITHOUT ANY CARE There is very little in my heart I don’t know either hate or love But what I posses, hard to express Like affection in prejudice’s stress I feel a chain of tears and smiles Whatever it is, it’s stranger than skies The skies of my...
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    Would you please evaluate my this poem?

    786 8 November 2010 Zahid from Pakistan I HAVE NOTHING NOW TO SHAME My acquaintance is curse Their production is worse Their moves are the indicators Of their intellectual matters Their wisdom is to hurt me Bow my head to their knee They did badly with my brother And yet not left my mother...
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    This is the further development of my characters in drama, what do you say about it?

    The Doctors’ Class It is the prettiest class by its ugliest face O Allah! save my enemies, with your grace Their appointment is appointment of death Chaucer’s doctor is their example in depth They’re the butchers, who slaughter men A woman is only a sexual organ for them There is bargaining of...
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    More in Scene III of my drama, what do you say about it?

    Zahid A mark of a fool is; he thinks himself a wise He is fool and he thinks the rest fool beside Forth he has speculations of priority complex His acts are full of actions like Oedipus Rex He possesses prejudice that Elizabeth had Mr. Darcy was a character that Jane made She made him to show...
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    Here is further development in my drama, what do you say about this?

    Ecclesiastical Class So you want to say, we did not interpret well Interpretation is what we have with us to sell We do our best in the process of development Whatever a religion does, it is life’s experiment Present, if you have any things new to realize Don’t betray people from the religion...
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    This is the scene II of my drama, what do you say about it?

    Scene II Setting Zahid is in between a big round table hall, where an ecclesiastical class is sitting around him to betray him from his vision. Dress Zahid is in three piece suit of white color and he has a very fine stick in his hand. Ecclesiastical Class We came to know, you spread a new...
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