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    What do you think of this scene? (short)?

    This is a snippet from a story I'm writing. They are waking up, but this isn't the opening of the book. Opinions? Critiques/reviews? Thanks in advance! Something was beeping. Something loud and annoying and he couldn't figure out what it was. He rolled over and fumbled for the alarm. With a...
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    Opinions of character name?

    I'm writing a short story, but I'm having trouble coming up with a good name for one of the characters. I was thinking about naming Tobias. I wanted something older/historical(like a family name), but not too stuffy for a guy in his late teens/early 20s. What's your first idea of what someone...
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    What should be in a school gym?

    I'm designing a school for my drafting class. Its a combined middle and high school with 3500 students. 1500 in middle and 2000 in high school. One building is a gym. I'm having trouble deciding what should be in it. Obviously locker rooms, and one large room with basketball courts (a standard...
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    Stuck on short story. What should happen next?

    I'm writing a short story for class. I didn't really plan it out, I just started writing. I like what I have so far, but I don' t know where to go with it. What do you think could happen next? (and do you like the scene so far?) Thanks! The current scene is the main character, a 16 year old...
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    Stuck on short story. What should happen next?

    I'm writing a short story for class. I didn't really plan it out, I just started writing. I like what I have so far, but I don' t know where to go with it. What do you think could happen next? (and do you like the scene so far?) Thanks! The current scene is the main character, a 16 year old...
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    List of controversies/debates?

    I'm looking for a list of today's common political controversies/debates. It can be anything well know, from social (abortion and gay marriage) to financial (tax rules and gov't regulation) to political (border patrol, military involvement in foreign countries) etc. Can someone list of some, or...
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    What is the average number of kids out at recess at one time?

    Roughly how many kids (or classes) are allowed out per recess area at a time? I imagine there has to be a limit so there isn't overcrowding. I'm sure it depends on the size of the school/lot, but what do you think would be average?
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    Help with economics hw?

    I'm doing microecomomics hw, but I'm stuck on these few probelams. Can anyone answer one or more of them? Thanks in advance! 1. Which of the following is not necessary for price discrimination to occur? a. control over price by the firm b. a downward-sloping demand curve facing the firm c...
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    Would you be interested in this story idea?

    I recently strted writing a new story. I'm not entirely sure about it though. Does it sound interesting? It is hundreds of years after an unspecified world collapse and the world has devolved into chaos. Most of it is mostly rural, very basic education/technology, very religious, and large...
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    What genre would this be (description)?

    I'm writing a short story, but I'm not really sure what genre it would fit into. It's set in an alternate/future world. It follows a group of kids/teens who go on an adventure to save their friend after he's kidnapped. I would think sci-fi, but with no aliens or space travel. Maybe fantasy, but...
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    Help with economics hw?

    I'm doing microecomomics hw, but I'm stuck on these few probelams. Can anyone answer one or more of them? Thanks in advance! 1. Which of the following is not necessary for price discrimination to occur? a.control over price by the firm b.a downward-sloping demand curve facing the firm...
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    What did you think of the 2010 Toyota Highlander commercial kid?

    The ones where the little boy talks about how his family station wagon is "lame" and the Toyota Highlander is cool. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x8EkBVEQMvg My friends and I were talking about it the other day. They thought it was cute, but I thought the kid was really obnoxious. I know its...
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    Does this story idea sound interesting?

    I'm thinking about writing a short story. It's set in the future, after a world order collapse. The elite have created a "safe zone", with a few large cities and the surrounding small towns within a protected wall surrounding the country (like the wall of china). Outside of the wall, there is...
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