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    Do you like this peice of writing?

    ok, i posted a question earlier with the first peice, this is the second bit. i'll explain in case you didn't first bit. a girl is the last one out of school, on a friday evening. she hears footsteps and see's a shadow dart across the mirror in the toilets. when she goes to the playground the...
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    is this writing good?? i need more opinions please.?

    i posted a question earlier with the first part on, this is the second bit. the first bit was a girl who was the last to leave school. she hears footsteps behind her and a shadow on the mirror in the toilets. when she gets to the playground the gates are locked. behind her a voice says " thats...
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