the thing i noticed about your pic is that the whole background is quite high definition but the face is a bit blurred so maybe you can sharpen that area a little bit ... otherwise great effort.
please answer mine
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20110814155247AAYFyQx
ok here it goes
It seeps through my bones,
like cold;
You touched me like a warm
WHAT DO YOU UNDERSTAND FROM IT AND GIVE YOUR OPINION ABOUT IT
TELL ME IS THIS ARTIST GOOD OR BAD
soul,
You made me feel cherished
even in the moan,
Today i want to sleep with you
forevermore.
sorry the opinion...