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I'm working on a book, and would like to get an unbiased opinion about my writing. So i've included a short excerpt below. I just wanna know what you think, and if my writing seems detailed enough, if the characters pull you in at all. I thank you for your opinion. Sierra sipped on her coffee...

I'm working on a book, and would like to get an unbiased opinion about my writing. So i've included a short excerpt below. I just wanna know what you think, and if my writing seems detailed enough, if the characters pull you in at all. I thank you for your opinion. Sierra sipped on her coffee...