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    You will only get the end of this poem if you've seen City Of Angel's?

    My bones are tired And my pretend blue eyes are the same I feel very weak So much so that I can no longer speak I only grunt when you ask “are you awake?” I cannot think of that now I wish to fall asleep In the wild ruins of a meadow- Green and fresh I wish to be surrounded by death I’m tired...
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    is this good poetry...i mean i need an opinion on my writing..and possibly some

    ummm....its okay =]]]] i mean its not the best...its choppy =( but out of 5, and 5 being best i give it a 3 =]]]]
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    What if you were insulted by someone on Y!A Poetry?

    haha! thats your poem? honestly...haha! it rocks! its different =]]] i like different =] id all depend on HOW i was insulted...if it was like sexually or something...and TOTALLY not based on my question...then id report it but if it was just a mean ass comment on my poem or something then id...
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    What does anyone think of this poem please, i'm 15!?

    its REALLY amazing but this part "But unfortunately rare" is a little strange...i mean thats fortunate...being one of a kind is VERY fortunate...so i mean...idk what youd replace that with...but yeah dude...being rare is DEFINITELY fortunate...everybody wants to be one of a kind you know? okay...
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    What do you think of my extended metaphor poem?

    What is confusion? Is it a bird without water, a bird without wings, like a singsong dove who can no longer sing? Does it feel similar to a bird falling to the ground and never being found? Or is it like a bird, but a bird with water, a bird with wings, that suddenly blinks and loses his...
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    What about the ones left behind. A poem?

    best poem ive read all day...KEEP IT UP! =]]]]
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    What if someone likes drawing violent images?

    it means they either LIKE pain or are enduring pain. OR it could mean that they are just plain physcos and need help...haha! especially if they are still young, like 8-16 years...thats just wierd. but if its an adult then idk what that could mean. but if its kids...DEFINITELY get them some help...
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