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I just wrote this, any advice or thoughts? I just wrote this poem.. so it's rough, but what do you think? What do you think its about? What can I fix? 1-10? Should I say "Like limbs of a tree/It spread like trickery" instead of my original line? Should I say "That bird left, and left me/A...

What do you think of this poem? What do you think its about? Should I change anything and why? 1-10? THANK YOU :) _____________________________________________ you raised me, you teach me you have set me free from the very thing you withhold from me whether you knew or not is not the point i...