It may well be the beginning of my story, but I am not sure.
First off, what do you think?
What is your initial reaction?
DO you get the feeling that the character is 'high'? (question occurred because of what my friend said..)
Would you keep reading on (once you knew more about the story, or...
if you were into this sort of stuff..
You see, I'm horrible at writing teasers so this is probably aweful... anyway, comment, help.
thanks :)
Hilary Finch has no life. Until her sister builds her one.
Fawcett City’s most lavish hotel is owned by the beautiful socialite, Elena Finch. She’s...
if you were into this sort of stuff..
You see, I'm horrible at writing teasers so this is probably aweful... anyway, comment, help.
thanks :)
Hilary Finch has no life. Until her sister builds her one.
Fawcett City’s most lavish hotel is owned by the beautiful socialite, Elena Finch. She’s...
I just wrote this... actually inspired from a recent experience.
But i was wondering, I am thinking n my story i might make this guy my main characters love interest... It would mean changing my current one... but i think it feels right - more unusual than the genetic guy i have at th moment
so...