Ok now this poem is a little different the how I usually write, yes it is still a dark poem
I could never stop writing dark poetry
But I am trying a different style
And for those that are reading my poetry for the first time, I always write dark and NO I am not an EMO so save it.
I hope you...
Ok now this poem is a little different the how I usually write, yes it is still a dark poem
I could never stop writing dark poetry
But I am trying a different style
And for those that are reading my poetry for the first time, I always write dark and NO I am not an EMO so save it.
I hope you...
hi
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first i think you should break up the poem in lines rather then having it all bunched up
second
if you don't mind i have a small adjustment
i gave you everything..you took everything=i gave you everything..you took it all away
also try to stay away from repetition coz when you...
hi
ok buddy
poems do not have to rhyme
it seems like you are trying to hard
relax don't think about writing too much and let the pen do all the talking
and do not go in to too much detail
example
That smile that you smiled= i still remember how you smiled
it need some working on
but you...