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    my new poem...pain killers...what do you think?

    Ok now this poem is a little different the how I usually write, yes it is still a dark poem I could never stop writing dark poetry But I am trying a different style And for those that are reading my poetry for the first time, I always write dark and NO I am not an EMO so save it. I hope you...
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    my new poem...pain killers...what do you think?

    Ok now this poem is a little different the how I usually write, yes it is still a dark poem I could never stop writing dark poetry But I am trying a different style And for those that are reading my poetry for the first time, I always write dark and NO I am not an EMO so save it. I hope you...
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    short love poem...please read?!?!?

    hi ok first i think you should break up the poem in lines rather then having it all bunched up second if you don't mind i have a small adjustment i gave you everything..you took everything=i gave you everything..you took it all away also try to stay away from repetition coz when you...
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    How is this poem? Any help would be great?

    hi ok buddy poems do not have to rhyme it seems like you are trying to hard relax don't think about writing too much and let the pen do all the talking and do not go in to too much detail example That smile that you smiled= i still remember how you smiled it need some working on but you...
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