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    What feelings are conveyed by my new Poem? Misconception?

    Disguised salvation,oozing from every pore, Join me,sit down,eat,first close the door. Foolishness of misconception,immaculate to some, Demonology,deeply rooted,has us on the run. Is this the beginning or the end?Was anything hidden? Hop a train ride to Hell,truth is forbidden. All aboard ,your...
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    What do you think of my short Psychological thriller/flash fiction?

    I like all the horror movies and like writing deadly dark poems. This is great,I give it a 9 1/2...Thanks..keep writing.
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    What do you think of my short Psychological thriller/flash fiction?

    I like all the horror movies and like writing deadly dark poems. This is great,I give it a 9 1/2...Thanks..keep writing.
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    What do you think of my short Psychological thriller/flash fiction?

    I like all the horror movies and like writing deadly dark poems. This is great,I give it a 9 1/2...Thanks..keep writing.
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    What do you think of my short Psychological thriller/flash fiction?

    I like all the horror movies and like writing deadly dark poems. This is great,I give it a 9 1/2...Thanks..keep writing.
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    What do you think of my short Psychological thriller/flash fiction?

    I like all the horror movies and like writing deadly dark poems. This is great,I give it a 9 1/2...Thanks..keep writing.
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    Is "My Love Has Arrived" a poem, poemsy, or whimsy poemsy?

    OMG.sounds like me.but wait.You didn't. Now way before it is wheelchair time, Guess only one waited on line. The sweetness,unsurpassed by others shines. Yes,i am so glad we can share some time. You shouldn't have.but thanks..xxx
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    Where do you see your self in the next ten years .. will you Still be a poet?

    I never was a poet,but one person loves my poems. I will just write them to her,that way there's no jealousy. bye
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    Fill in the blanks here, if you would oblige my whimsy?

    Cast about the sea and spit out, Bundled up mates tie knots then pout. Winds sweeping trails through the ocean, Hours of quiet memories for every notion. Left alone in a ship of despair, With no one on-board and only one beer. Feelings of soft melancholy ,long underwear. yyeeehhha ha ha..byeeexxx
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    Fill in the blanks here, if you would oblige my whimsy?

    Cast about the sea and spit out, Bundled up mates tie knots then pout. Winds sweeping trails through the ocean, Hours of quiet memories for every notion. Left alone in a ship of despair, With no one on-board and only one beer. Feelings of soft melancholy ,long underwear. yyeeehhha ha ha..byeeexxx
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    Is their a sonnet about how love sucks?

    Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a pail of water, Little player Jack ran away and did nasty with Jill's daughter. I really hope you understand that Jack got tail, If not for sure, class you will fail. bye
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    If you could trade places with any of the poets in this section for a day, who...

    Happy Hiram.To find out why he is always happy. Keep writing ,so i can be happy.I find nothing good at all about your poem.So? you're 14? Why i keep getting thumbs down?
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    classmate.com revenge on moi for some (besides it wasnt suppose to stick)

    It may be your former BF,good thing that you left him. People in general are very jealous of others. Your own friends will sometimes try to stop you from getting ahead in anything.People as a group do not like others to be content.Sometimes even doing childish things to upset you.Move on.
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