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    I had Sex with 2 men?

    OOo girl GEt YOU SOME. But no guy likes a sassy woman. I COULD PUT UP With a sassy girl for so long and then just snap. So if you know you are sassy, then you know you need to change. Sassyness does not get you anywhere other than kicked out to the curb.
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    Opinions on this poem please? Criticism and thoughts would be appreciated.?

    You know i dont like your phrases...i dont know why... For example...you say "To the weakened glare of the sun" So the sun is glaring,,,then why is it weak? Is it weakening to you or is it sun down? Another example would be "Should I be, Then I wish not awake From this wishful vision Of my...
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    My poetry , I want your opinion.?

    Mama wont tell me whats going on in here She be up all day sitting, looking up out in fear Don't go mama Don't leave me mama But all you left me with was with this tear Mama
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    mature poem by young black urban poet?

    Wow...so shocking....wow ...you call this Urban poetry...give me a break. White man....that was so forty years ago.
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