buyer? A professional buyer is someone who buys stuff for a company to sell.
I need a skill that they would need to have OTHER than:
-investigative and analytical skills
-math skills
-organizational skills
-being able to make quick decisions
-oral communication skills
-being able to be flexible...
As for your plot, I don't think it would really interest me. "Everyday life" stories tend to bore me.
Anyway, here are some possible corrections...
I think the second paragraph needs to be split into more paragraphs. As it is, it just seems to ramble on.
"November Air"-- "air" shouldn't be...