Critique would be nice. Someone asked for a rhyming scheme poem so I made this up lol. I didn't think it was bad for a 5 minute poem.
How monsters are made
There was a boy who walked home everyday from school
He was very lonely and no one thought he was cool
He ate in the classroom because...
Preferably romantic comedy. I asked this before but I didn't get the response I wanted and someone just named some authors. Can you just give me some of your favorite book titles, and maybe a reason you liked it? thank you :)
This is the first free verse I have done. But please critique it and tell me what you think.
I hate this world.
Am I crazy for not understanding the world we live in?
Am I the only one that is haunted by it's darkness?
How far must we fall in this earthly debt,
and how long will we last before...
Just made it up right now
The terrible teens
She's a lonely girl where beauty is her cage
Hopes don't untwirl, her story stuck to one page
She wants a nice guy but she's attracted to the jerks
The ones that are quite shy will never seem to work
still can't understand her friends only want to...
I've known hundreds of people with adhd, depression, shizophrenia, etc. I don't believe in psychological conditions most of the time, I believe most of them are misdiagnosed based off how often people must take medication to be a "normal".
If you live in a different country than the U.S.A can...