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    I wrote this poem for my boyfriend, can I have some criticism please?

    It can be good criticism or criticism helping me to improve on it. He's gone out of town, and so the poem speaks about how I (the girl) misses him. Please comment? Lying in bed, Staring at the ceiling, A blank look, A gush of an unpleasant feeling. Slow breathes, Almost like a sigh. A pang of...
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    Here's a little something I wrote for my boyfriend, more like a sorry

    letter.. how is it? Opinions on how it is would be appreciated. :) You walked into my life and hit me like a big yellow taxi. The impact you have on me today is tremendous. It's just been a little over a month but it feels like more because we've already been through some tough pulls, but even...
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