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    What you think of my first poem in like years? Plz no harsh critisism :]?

    You couldn’t carry it down much deeper, To dig hole under your own feet, And when she trembles her arms at your face She drags you with her so sweet, Could you tell me? Why the sun goes under me whenever you open your eyes And How a once flight bird lives like a bat in the night You couldn’t...
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    This is the beginning of my story? Please tell me what you think =] Ill try to answer...

    ...your questions!? “Sometimes I sit and wonder: how does it make me feel? I think about how maybe someday the pain of thought will go away. And if it won’t... But maybe, if you did not hurt me, if you did not lie to me, if you did not kick me when I was down, I would have learned how to see the...
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    How is it ? good? :] plz tell me. I'll attempt to answer your questions in return.?

    “Sometimes I sit and wonder: how does it make me feel? I think about how maybe someday the pain of thought will go away. And if it won’t... But maybe, if you did not hurt me, if you did not lie to me, if you did not kick me when I was down, I would have learned how to see the light. The more I...
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