I'm in a creative writing class and well poetry is not exactly my strong suit, just happens to be in the curriculum. Sooo could you read this and tell me what you think of it, any advice would be awesome. Thanks!
Final Draft
Tales of urban cultured artists.
City slickers coming in hot...
Hair in a tangled mess
Head full of stress
Doesnt matter how i dress
All that is noticed is my ass and my breast
But I must stand strong
All those thoughts are wrong
This is just a test
I will look beyond the mirror
Rub my eyes til the image is clear
discover the woman that lies inside
and...