Recent content by Precious Gem

Start with the "having respect for herself" talk. Then move on to making guys respect her too. Explain that she did the right thing by telling that boy no and she needs to keep on saying no. Tell her about pressure from peers to give it up and convince her that sex isn't all that it is cracked...

Top three favorite restaurants are: 1. Friday's 2. Cracker Barrel 3. Golden Corral I live in Long Beach MS

I wouldn't mind the fanning part but the grapes part, no way. I don't know where their hands have been. Ew.

I wouldn't mind the fanning part but the grapes part, no way. I don't know where their hands have been. Ew.

Violent video games influence children to resolve their problems through violence. They learn this behavior from these games and know no other way to resolve the problems. Then bring in data from school violence. Most of the students who play these games have emotional issues to begin with and...

You should start out with the reason for the move. Is this move preceding a new job with better pay? If placed in this light then 1,000 miles is not that far away considering modern technology. Families move all the time. Your parents should be happy for your bright future. Promise to to keep...

This is a good start. I felt there was way too much commentary and that interfered with the plot. It started more like chit chat that a genuine story. You have a good grasp of adjectives and didn't over use them. Your story needs polishing but you have a good foundation. I am not into these...