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    Edit my short story please? Is there anything that you think is wrong with it?

    I'm writing a short story for the librarys writing contest, and I want to know if there's anything you think needs to be changed. ANYTHIIINNG... Alyna was watching the snowflakes fall from her window, her chin in her hands. She remembered something her big brother Sam had told her, a long, long...
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