Hi, I'm the market to buy a new pair of skis and am really interested in buying either the Kenja or the Aura. I want to know how they will work for me.
I ski all blue fine and black diamond fine too (depending where). I ski MOSTLY on trail, occasionally I'm up for really easy glade skiing, but...
Um. I don't really like them. A bit too cliche and cheery and happy for my taste. A bit... lame actually.
The limerick doesn't make sense. I KNOW it's a limerick, but the flow of poetry is really weird. The 2-3 line flow doesn't work too well, and neither does the first and last line(they seem...
This isn't a poem, this is a paragraph of literature. The way you bunched up all the (supposed) stanzas is quite confusing to the reader, all I have to say for now is that you used 'the' too much.