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    You're on the phone and it's keeping disconnected and connected again. What's the

    natural English expression? I know we can say "it's a bad line", but i want to know if there is any other expression in this situation!
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    My first poem ever so please help me..?

    The dawn of a morning creaked in the sky Hearing its echo he ventured outside Out on the porch observing the blooms he noticed a flower with the face of a moon Trampled down plants surrounded its land Left standing firm with a glare unabashed Unsettling fears crept in his ears...
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    Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease comment on this poem?

    The dawn of a morning creaked in the sky Hearing its echo he ventured outside Out on the porch observing the blooms he noticed a flower with the face of a moon Trampled down plants surrounded its land Left standing firm with a glare unabashed Unsettling fears crept in his ears...
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