Recent content by ms. blacksmith

no, it's really good ... it reflects how u feel which is all that matters really.. it's the whole point of poetry .. but if u want to imporve it i think it needs to flow better ..idk

I've been writing poems for like two years now... but i never studied poetry, so i never kno if what i write can be called a poem or not ... that's one of the most recent poems i wrote: Significant noise When all lights are off Every breath is gone And sounds are down I would still hear a...