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    more poems for you, my treat?

    this one took me 20 mins have fun, leave opinion bellow I stand at the shore Of this black and caustic lake Corroding the mind Eroding the body I know it’s wrong But this deathly place It calls my soul And draws my thoughts How long have I been here? In this place, of destructive love Even...
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    hey presto, yet another poem for you all to endulge in!?

    I stand amongst these shattered dreams My love for you, has turned destructive Your subtle denial of the very thing I crave Has broken me beyond repair As I stand here, I observe you Like a sentinel of hope now lost You smile, that perfect, unbearable smile I’m losing control of my life Not...
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    had a nightmare, wrote a poem about it. oppinions?

    WHERE AM I?! I'm freezing cold Yet I'm sweating like crazy I’ve never felt this fear before With shaking limbs I crawl out of bed Afraid to make a sound Terrified to make a noise I grab Annabel My choice of weapon clear I make my way to the door Feet firmly on the floor I hear a noise A sharp...
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    well, for those who care, here is yet another poem.?

    hahaha, this is my old stuff, feel free to be critical. A young man panics Lamenting over these vile tricks Yet he know it’s needed Even though against it his soul has pleaded In a rush he tumbles Face first into a clump of brambles A horrific scream of pain Pierced the drum of rain In a...
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    what do you think of this poem?

    This freezing place This freezing place Of heartbreak and woe Holds within its chilling grasp A warm glimmer of hope I spy an oddity, funny in its cruelty As I reach out to touch its surface, I observed you for the first time Plan, yet beautiful, on the other side Interested, I mumble you a...
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