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Definitely break up your descriptions and put them in little by little. You don't want your reader to be overwhelmed or bored by a long description of each person, so introduce their physical characteristics in pieces. It's good that each fighter has his/her own style and weapon, that will help...

Definitely break up your descriptions and put them in little by little. You don't want your reader to be overwhelmed or bored by a long description of each person, so introduce their physical characteristics in pieces. It's good that each fighter has his/her own style and weapon, that will help...

Definitely break up your descriptions and put them in little by little. You don't want your reader to be overwhelmed or bored by a long description of each person, so introduce their physical characteristics in pieces. It's good that each fighter has his/her own style and weapon, that will help...

Definitely break up your descriptions and put them in little by little. You don't want your reader to be overwhelmed or bored by a long description of each person, so introduce their physical characteristics in pieces. It's good that each fighter has his/her own style and weapon, that will help...