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    Philosophy Debate: Would Buddha be considered enlightened or depressed by todays

    The Buddha is the Buddha and no time or space can change Him. mho.
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    Is this a good poem so far?

    It seems like prose to me. Yes, you need to work on it, my dear. It is anger that I smell here. Nothing wrong with that, but I should do more than smelling it. I should read words that make me feel it, read it, yet with no words censured. So, you could skip that one and replace it with...
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    Would you be kind and read my first poem?

    Are you sure it is your first poem? It seems very good to me. It also seems to be a tribute to a person dear to the author. I think it is very enigmatic, and could be clarified. But obviously you, or someone who helped you, have tried. It is a very original love poem. congrat's
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