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  1. M

    I'm a poet and I like to write, but lately I haven't been satisfied with

    stanza 3 fails as a transition, therefore the conclusion in stanza 4 comes off as whimsical ('less that's the effect you were aiming for). as for quality, no opinion. cute idea, developed well in the first couple of stanzas, then the poem dies for me.
  2. M

    How long have you been writing poetry?

    I've been writing since adolescence; I've been writing psuedopoetry for about a year now, unfortunately the endeavor has not been fruitful.
  3. M

    There's no crying in POETRY! (comment/critique)?

    So ... uh ... you're sure your words do it justice? "the words - as only I can translate" ... at least you're honest.
  4. M

    some fella tells me sad poetry is not cool, ok here then?

    Picnic piss.
  5. M

    I realize that I'm not a poet?

    The blades of grass irritate my toes, as the wind wisps cacophony prose, lip sync verse brings modesty close, where bored dissension thwarts imminent throes. I've been written, forcefully played. An old lyric sung out of tune, and these wooden lips just keep moving.
  6. M

    How do you draw people towards your poetry, yet keep them out of your head?

    Just keep writing for yourself.
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