IT SHOULD HAVE A TITLE BECAUSE A GOOD TITLE ALWAYS MAKES POETRY WORTH RECITATION . A TITLE UNFOLDS THE GIST OF THE POEM.
IT IS A GOOD RHYTHMICAL ATTEMPT REVEALING THE CONTENTS.IT NEEDS MUCH TO IMPROVE.THE IDEAS, WHEN PUT ON A PIECE OF PAPER DO NOT SOUND GREAT AND CREATE GOOD POETRY .
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"SOUL -THE SAVIOUR" OR " SOUL INMATE"CAN BE TWO GOOD TIITLES.
IT IS TOO LONG BEATING ABOUT THE BUSH.IT IS LIKE A POETICAL PROSE AND NEEDS A LOT OF IMPROVEMENT.