It is a little bit cliche, corny, and very Shakespearean like, but I actually like it. I wouldn't worry too much about the iambic pentamenter being messed up, all the good poets broke the rules. It's classy and romantic.
It is a little bit cliche, corny, and very Shakespearean like, but I actually like it. I wouldn't worry too much about the iambic pentamenter being messed up, all the good poets broke the rules. It's classy and romantic.