I have a hard time to follow your thoughts. I suggest that while you are writing you should sit with someone who is born speaking English, they can help you find the right words as you are using them. I think maybe you have chosen some wrong words and it has changed your intention, because it...
confusion swirls like a cloud of color
grey blue green brown orange
red yellow purple
black
on my tongue I begin to taste it
for a moment
sweet
bitter
sour
moments flashing in my mind
stored like photographs
can be recalled
in an instant
but I can not
remember
what I want
to touch
with skin so...
Poetry is emotion put into words. How do you fit emotion into structure?
Poetry has all forms but one source. It comes from the heart, that's the only prerequisite.
Have fun and don't worry about 'rules'. There are none.
I have decided to combine my two favorite YA! categories and ask this question.
What songs can you think of that are actual poetry also?
Lou Reed's 'The raven' comes to mind.
And of course, being a Novalis fan, I know that just about everything they have recorded comes from the German poet...
My daughter (and sometimes myself also) likes to paint with oil paints. She buys these 'rigid' canvas and I dont think they would look right framed. (Most of her stuff is pretty abstract)
I would like to know if there is a way I can mount some sort of hook to them to get them on my wall...