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  1. K

    Just posted a poem a bit ago and someone said its not the emotion they wanted...

    ...to feel. Here is another.? There's not a day I don't think about your touch Think about how you say you love me so much Think about your beautiful smile or Think about the future in the isle Think about your hand in mine Even the feeling of your finger tips along my spine Seeing your...
  2. K

    Let me know what your thoughts are on my poem. Thanks?

    So many problems have occurred. Just wish i can make it all a single blur. so much pain and agony Just seeing life so gloomy it seems so terrible so why not end it when it hardly bearable It will end the suffering and will end the crying It will end the fake smiling and even the lying i just...
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