The night. She loved the night. Rushes of cool air, no matter how hot it had been during the day.
The hideous reality of the day seemed to disappear. Fade out to black.
The night was the only time when things went right for her.
Rumors spread like diseases. They snapped every heart apart and...
I am 14, and Vietnamese. English is not my first language so I know it MUST have some flaws. I'm open to any critique, good or bad. And most importantly, I'd love to hear your suggestions on improvement. Lots of thanks!
P/S Some of them should have been in italics -_- So if you find any sentence...