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Critique my revised story beginning? What do you like and NOT like about my writing? (It's colloquial.) Would you keep reading? words like this *_______* are suppose to be in italics. thanks guys. --------------------------------------… I had just walked a few blocks from Tony's house when a...

hey this is the continuation to of something i posted on earlier. Just so you know it's about a 15 yearold named Lionel who falls into Hell and goes off in an epic adventur..blah,blah,blah. Anyways, this is a scene pretty close to the begining where the crack which he actually falls through is...

more specifically when your reading through the questions on yahoo answere here in the book and authors section, what kind of questions grab your attention and make you interested in them, maybe enough to answer? example#1: "can you help me with a book title?" example#2:" i need a name for my...